The Golden Palace

[joe]

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[Guest]

great story i only wish the girl was hotter

[Guest]

Excellant story and the picture's sure helped :D

[Guest]

Great i love slow transformations ;)

[Guest]

Nice story, nice art. Just one thing. I just skimmed the story and looked at the picture, but i got the impression that this guy changes his underwear at work? I and most I know or know of, get dressed in the morning and then either wear the clothes all day or just change their 'overwear' for work.
(So what does he wear under his work pants then?)

[danyellets]

Love the story it was one of my favorites on fictionmania. I wish it could happen to me I love the slow transformation.

[wxhluyp]

The is also one of my more cherished TG works. I also want to "big up" slow-transformations... for me instant transformation all but miss the point. Change should be soaked in elaborated. With little elaboration there is little (or no) recognisation that the feminine has become feminine!