Corey Taylor's Big Bodacious Adventure/Valley Girl, Fer Sure

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Corey Taylor's Big Bodacious Adventure/Valley Girl, Fer Sure

Post by joe » Sun Aug 28, 2011 1:36 pm

This is the spot for feedback on the Sick Puppy Press publication "Corey Taylor's Big Bodacious Adventure."

No spoilers, please!

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Re: Corey Taylor's Big Bodacious Adventure/Valley Girl, Fer

Post by anon42 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:55 pm

Just read it the other day, loved it :)

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Re: Corey Taylor's Big Bodacious Adventure/Valley Girl, Fer

Post by Marlene » Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:42 am

Joe -- When I was reading the preview, the text on page 17 where the smaller picture is located is missing, and is all mashed together on page 20 where a similar picture is.

Slaughter's name isn't capitalized on page 37 in the first paragraph.

This isn't to nitpick or denigrate your excellent work, Joe.... it's just to let you know because I know you do such great work, I didn't want to see these error mar your stellar record.

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Re: Corey Taylor's Big Bodacious Adventure/Valley Girl, Fer

Post by angj » Mon Nov 07, 2011 8:28 am

It was a fun read. Enjoyed both the story and the images. Please continue to write more. Thanks.

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