It would've been a more appropriate fate for Hannah to be Goldie's mate, rather than a meal... but that's just me.
Loved the story, Joe!
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- Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:42 am
- Forum: Sick Puppy Press stories
- Topic: Corey Taylor's Big Bodacious Adventure/Valley Girl, Fer Sure
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Joe -- When I was reading the preview, the text on page 17 where the smaller picture is located is missing, and is all mashed together on page 20 where a similar picture is. Slaughter's name isn't capitalized on page 37 in the first paragraph. This isn't to nitpick or denigrate your excellent work, ...